This Mexican mole lizard, Bipes biporus, was spotted aboveground in June in Baja California by Sara Ruane, professor of evolutionary biology and herpetology at Rutgers University-Newark, who was delighted to see what she had considered to be a “mythical” find. (Source)
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too look this up, too see if this was real or fake, then too see if this is a snake or not, found out that it’s real, and it’s a lizard, i also found out that a snakes is a reptile with out eyelids, meaning there are snakes with legs, this blow my mind X3
Not bad! If it’s not taking liberties with your impressive creativity, might I just make a few corrections in meter:
Your poetry is terrible and lame.
It brings regret to you, and brings you shame
Just like your drunken elven father did
The time he fucked your mother, plus you’re stupid.
You see, the first line was written in fairly passable iambic pentameter, and I thought it a shame that the following lines didn’t quite have the same structure. The kernel of an idea was clearly present in the poem you submitted to me, and some of the language was visceral and emotive, but I think that being a bit stricter with meter would lend itself well to the rhythm and flow of your lines, particularly if you ever had plans to read it aloud, although of course that would mean coming off Anonymous, so I completely understand if that’s not on the cards for your poetic career. I also really liked the rhyming of lame / shame. The fact that both are thematically as well as semantically linked works very well, connoting negative feelings of self-worth and reflecting in a nuanced yet obvious manner on the psyche of its author.
I hope you make use of my suggestions. I truly have made them with the best of intentions.
Let me know how it goes when you submit it to a prestigious poetry magazine; I’m sure it’ll be a veritable shoo-in.
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I’ve still have no progress on accessing this account from another facet, nevertheless my life has not be quiet. Drama in multiple parts of my family, friends, now work, plus I begin IOP Wednesday…I’m so fucking nervous. It will be good for me. Good things will come from seeking help…right?
